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I feel alone.
Seperate from others.
Suffering from a broken heart.
I cry.

I have friends.
They care for me.
But their too busy with their lives.
Am I selfish?

I stand in the highwall not caring.
I watch my life pass by in blurrs.
Turning my head just looking around.
I bleed.

My heart bleeds.
I feel so alone.
I watch people hug and kiss.
I want.

I try to get noticed.
I scream at the top of my lungs.
No one notices.
I fall.

I curl up in fetal position in the middle of the floor.
I tug my hair gently to see if I'm still alive.
I claw at my skin to bleed more.
I disappear.

My life keeps on going.
But I dont.
I walk like on autopilot.
I'm non-existent.
I feel alone.
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:iconthatroamingangel:
ThatRoamingAngel Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Student Artist
moi aussi
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cheshire987357 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Student General Artist
I love your poem, im going through this right now, my friends are always there but always seem to shut me out of their conversations and I just tell myself im being a stupid needy freak
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TheCavesInObllivion Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student General Artist
it's funny how poetry and writings like this can make me feel a little better...
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Diamond5OOO Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Artist
agreed.
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ElwinRansom Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
same
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your-personal-demon Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
same here 
kinda reminds me of who I am 
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:icongorillazplanet:
gorillazplanet Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student General Artist
i feel this way every day but i dont understand why im so loved by so many people yet i feel so sad Really Sad 
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:iconsaiyukilover666:
SaiyukiLover666 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
that's my life too 
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:icongaby-neko:
gaby-neko Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student
So me right now....
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:iconstarice1:
Starice1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
me......
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:iconspitestar:
Spitestar Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow sad story.
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:iconbeituna:
beituna Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
my life keeps on going but i dnt....exactly mate
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JennyJinx Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
i loved that manga where you got the pic from!! clover, right? :3
oh, and on the other note, there will always be somebody there. :] :tighthug:
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Lovely-Madness-13 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But you're not. Really, you're not. And you do exist, more than you think.
May I use this in my group?
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Benji-the-squirrel Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
wow....I can't tell you how badly this describes me right now. >.>;; Oddly enough it has made me feel better. :) so thanks.
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dreamcatcher271 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
this is... so sad.
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:iconimxanadu:
ImXanaDu Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
I really, really, REALLY love clover
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:iconpukkadj:
pukkadj Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
I love your poem. Thank you.
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VictoriaSpero Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
love this
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SoilderofaDoubt Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011
Nice poem, I love the clover manga, I wish they wouLd finish it though... Sue is so pretty in this pic
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SacredMurder Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011
Depressing... My boyfriend and I had a rough break up...
And sometimes I wish I would just go blind so I wouldn't see them together...
You seem upset... Call me?



!Hugs For the Bi!
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sampea Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
Beautifull.
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simply4franki Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010
That's how I feel. I love the poem. The emotion in it is great. I hope one day it gets better for you.
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:iconanime-goth-girl:
anime-goth-girl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
I've felt this way ever since I was assaulted at school my freshman year...
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DarkAndLonlySoul Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
that's how i now feel 100% of the time.
I feel so alone because my own friends don't care for me so my mind makes friends for me.
but it's only a artificial-love
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LeftHandedGenius Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010
duuuuuude, i totes understand where u comin from, u know the pain and suffering and such :(
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jamieloves7 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
I feel the exact same way. I hate feeling alone. If you ever need someone to talk to about anything im here your not alone. I may not know you but im here for you, your not alone.
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Spring-Yellow Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
i feel the same...way sometimes , i try to push how i feel away so it cant get at me ...for it would bug me all day
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RentEure777 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
you can't push it away in any direction or behind any wall or under anything and you can't rely on just a friend to get rid of it, a friend would cast a thin and temporary shroud over it, the only person that can truely rid the painful,depressing feeling of loneliness and loveless is your love and heart, the person that was meant for you and the only person that would be glad to rid this feeling for you and give you a shoulder to cry on and make sure you won't feel this way ever again.
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Little-Angy-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow that's an amazing poem... I just can't believe that a poem can be so true...
it gives me the shivers *.*
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sathilium-airdnis Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
I remember feeling exactly like that for too many years.
Hope you didn't live through it. If you do, then try to see things the other way, the positive way.
However your poem is great. It brings, outside, feelings that can only be lived to know how's it like.
I think the last verse of each stanza was really good chosen. Those short senteces with pronoun and verb, nothing else, and the idea of increasing hope, from stanza 1 to 4, and the falling down to despair, until the end of the poem, are trully great.
I hope you keep writing! :)
**s**
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CheapGuy Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010
This is how I feel now. My love for someone went one way, and it didn't come back.
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weather-cougar Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
need a friend? i've always been alone... lone_wolf18@ymail.com ^^
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misty-mix Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
do you play sl? (referring to the furries comment)
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Em0-Ang3lz-gurl Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
That's amazing <3. how i feel 95% of the time
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AnimeLover19998 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
ditto
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sakura1215 Featured By Owner May 24, 2010
i love it, it like i can conect to this, nice job
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MusicxNeverxEnds Featured By Owner May 15, 2010
Love this .sometimes i fell this way too.
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Animaculote Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
this is big you are
great i am wooouuuuuuu
eres genial no manches
esta genial esto
xD

u
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sweetprey Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010   Writer
must be great to get two languages saying that.
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:iconbluepelt1:
Bluepelt1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Trust me, your not alone.
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SugarSweetSally Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010   Digital Artist
THis sucks...
My crush asked my bestfriend out...
she was trying to get US together..
now I suffer because I see him everyday at school.
and she doesnt want to be his.
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Libra1015 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
I love this pome. It's like... whow, a complete emotion read. :)
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DimTheVampire Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
i know how you feel
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km01259 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010
..... :( that is my life
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sad-soul-666 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
Tis true that all we broken hearted humans find each other and cry over our past memories that made us what we are today. the past is sad and the future pointless for we have no will to live in the present. thank you for sharing your memories with us broken folk. Thank you.
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Enna11 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh I hate this… everyone’s saying “it’s just for a moment”. Well it’s not. Life’s not a fairytale.
As a little kid I felt like this but no one was there for me and now I just don’t care and I managed on my own. Now I don’t need support I don’t need friends. Because that’s my life and I like it.
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Dischanted-Love Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009   Photographer
Thats so beautiful
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TheDollarTurtle Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
This poem is so true... I just feel alone in the world...
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Aliaphynaer Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009   Photographer
Fully relate-able.
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