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I feel alone.
Seperate from others.
Suffering from a broken heart.
I cry.

I have friends.
They care for me.
But their too busy with their lives.
Am I selfish?

I stand in the highwall not caring.
I watch my life pass by in blurrs.
Turning my head just looking around.
I bleed.

My heart bleeds.
I feel so alone.
I watch people hug and kiss.
I want.

I try to get noticed.
I scream at the top of my lungs.
No one notices.
I fall.

I curl up in fetal position in the middle of the floor.
I tug my hair gently to see if I'm still alive.
I claw at my skin to bleed more.
I disappear.

My life keeps on going.
But I dont.
I walk like on autopilot.
I'm non-existent.
I feel alone.
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:iconthecavesinobllivion:
TheCavesInObllivion Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member Student General Artist
it's funny how poetry and writings like this can make me feel a little better...
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:icondiamond5ooo:
Diamond5OOO Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Artist
agreed.
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:iconelwinransom:
ElwinRansom Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
same
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:iconyour-personal-demon:
your-personal-demon Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
same here 
kinda reminds me of who I am 
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:icongorillazplanet:
gorillazplanet Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student General Artist
i feel this way every day but i dont understand why im so loved by so many people yet i feel so sad Really Sad 
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:iconsaiyukilover666:
SaiyukiLover666 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
that's my life too 
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:icongaby-neko:
gaby-neko Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student
So me right now....
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:iconstarice1:
Starice1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
me......
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Spitestar Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow sad story.
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:iconbeituna:
beituna Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
my life keeps on going but i dnt....exactly mate
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